First Critique

I wanted to use emotion as the focus of my diptychs. The gaming community always has levels of frustration though the wide range of games. This first set of portraits I took were meant to show facial expressions as if I were a distraction to the player. Gaming usually comes with a side of irritation when you have to stop playing to either answer the phone, get the door, or whatever. I wanted to try and capture this emotion in order to have more interesting images. The second photo would be used to show reactions to defeat, which at some point every game has.
Here is a sample diptych and some of the better photos I took I may use.